Sunday, March 25, 2007

Revisions Post

After receiving feedback on my paper, I am rather satisfied. The notes that Nicole wrote seemed to mainly be a mistake that I made over and over again.

The problem was that I always put 'satellite radio' as 'Satellite Radio.' I am still uncertain as to which is correct due to the fact that I noticed it written both ways in articles I read.

Other than that repeating flaw, there were just really small suggestions; Some I followed, some I did not. I honestly feel like I will receive a good grade on this paper due to my hard work that I put into it over the past week or so.

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